EYE(I) SAW
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EYE(I) SAW
Eye(I) saw
Friends become enemies, over bottles of Hennessey
Enemies turn to friends, over bottles of Gin
Then friends become lovers, cause they didn`t use a rubber
Or lovers that hate eachother, cause one met a perfect 10
Then perfect became imperfect, kept to self and felt deserted
Insecure, it made her nervous, now she`s pullin` the pin
Then pens write good byes, suicide notes and cries
Cuz no matter what he tried, she fell in love with his friend
I seen murderers rape and kill, over crooked drug deals
Thinkin` a hundred dollar bill, was worth your next of kin
Then innocent bystanders, catch bullets in front of cameras
When asked why, we would answer: Cuz Jihad is a sin
Then planes fly into towers, guided by a higher power
Sharin` similar traits to ours, it`s all part of the end
Then endings became the start of depression, creatin` art
Painted over a breakin` heart, cause we`re too prideful to bend
Eye(I) saw
Smiles turn into cries, the truth turn into lies
As ears become our eyes, to see the silence within
Then silence turn into pain, as anger re-lit the flame
Knowin` they`re both the same, we still try to pretend
Then daughters without a mother, to tuck `em under the covers
And let her know that they love her, whenever she needs a friend
Then sons without a father, deadbeat or didn`t bother
That made it a lot harder, still they grew into men
Then children give birth to child, before they even learned to smile
Then sit and wait a while, just to do it again
Then people show interest in, this didlo in the election
No longer was it a question, cuz Prachannda will win!
I`ve also seen beautiful things, like freedom and birds sing
Oppurtunity knock AND RING, but I`ll save that for when
Cause really, how does it sound after ugly? Can`t make you proud
So I`m turnin` back around, I`m goin` to talk to him
...And let him know what eye(I) saw
Friends become enemies, over bottles of Hennessey
Enemies turn to friends, over bottles of Gin
Then friends become lovers, cause they didn`t use a rubber
Or lovers that hate eachother, cause one met a perfect 10
Then perfect became imperfect, kept to self and felt deserted
Insecure, it made her nervous, now she`s pullin` the pin
Then pens write good byes, suicide notes and cries
Cuz no matter what he tried, she fell in love with his friend
I seen murderers rape and kill, over crooked drug deals
Thinkin` a hundred dollar bill, was worth your next of kin
Then innocent bystanders, catch bullets in front of cameras
When asked why, we would answer: Cuz Jihad is a sin
Then planes fly into towers, guided by a higher power
Sharin` similar traits to ours, it`s all part of the end
Then endings became the start of depression, creatin` art
Painted over a breakin` heart, cause we`re too prideful to bend
Eye(I) saw
Smiles turn into cries, the truth turn into lies
As ears become our eyes, to see the silence within
Then silence turn into pain, as anger re-lit the flame
Knowin` they`re both the same, we still try to pretend
Then daughters without a mother, to tuck `em under the covers
And let her know that they love her, whenever she needs a friend
Then sons without a father, deadbeat or didn`t bother
That made it a lot harder, still they grew into men
Then children give birth to child, before they even learned to smile
Then sit and wait a while, just to do it again
Then people show interest in, this didlo in the election
No longer was it a question, cuz Prachannda will win!
I`ve also seen beautiful things, like freedom and birds sing
Oppurtunity knock AND RING, but I`ll save that for when
Cause really, how does it sound after ugly? Can`t make you proud
So I`m turnin` back around, I`m goin` to talk to him
...And let him know what eye(I) saw
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Re: EYE(I) SAW
dophe shit bruh.. Nicely written
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Nice shit...creative and flowed well..had a nice imagery here and multiple repeatative rhymes made it dope...structure was maintained and yeah decent read...
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Re: EYE(I) SAW
good looks here simple and a nice flow to follow it the metas were dope. Props dude
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Then innocent bystanders, catch bullets in front of cameras
Then children give birth to child, before they even learned to smile
Dope lines here
nice poetry bro keep writing
Then children give birth to child, before they even learned to smile
Dope lines here
nice poetry bro keep writing
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Re: EYE(I) SAW
Nuff said its good
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