Combustion in the Streets

Facing a radiant day and still I’m draggin’ my feet
Want it rainy and gray although I’m flaggin’ and beat
A brooding dragon that’s saggin’, an unhappy emcee
Who can spit flames and leave picnics black with debris
Attack and they flee saying “This can’t happen to me!”
Worn wings flapping and free but to a taxing degree
They received maximum heat, can’t handle my morose boast
I chose to oppose the cowards empowered I roast folks
I’m straight injecting a gross dose of mass hysteria
It’s just gloom and doomsday as I blast this area
Laugh and bury ‘em, fleeing but won’t disparage the source
On carriage or horse, still I catch one and I ravage the corpse
Can’t manage my force, they’re at a disadvantage of course
Savage the whores, masses pray as I leave parishes torched
Average and scorched plain folks who were just strolling to their jobs
Killing bankers, psychics and lawyers holding in their sobs
Even the cops who won’t leave the patrolling to the mob
And bitter dieticians who were consoling heavy slobs
Rolling in my jaws I feel flesh, organs and battered bones
f**ck the divorce rates, I’m the leading cause of shattered homes

Ima rip it up like a tear in ya clothes,
im like jason with the punches have u fearin my flows,
clearin my nose hachoo ur nuthin but a snot to me,
i put cement in the instrumental cos i rock the beat, stop ur fleet turn ur colony to ducklings destroy anything u ever knew its obvious ur nothing,
obvious ur bluffin thinking
u can rap and crap
leave u wheelchair bound when i snap ur back. Lmfao ..

lol, keep writing, this is not a battle section tho, welcome for the new members

lmao aree you guys battling in here, both's weak in there keystyles tho. some complex rhymes dragon you got there, keep writing

were not battlin'. were just writtin' ... btw, ya can say "tryin' .. lmao ..

Go_easy wrote:were not battlin'. were just writtin' ... btw, ya can say "tryin' .. lmao ..

you need to open a new topic each time you want to post your verse in order to have feedbacks.

This was decent keystyle. Some parts seemed shary with the flow but the rhyme made it consistent. language developed well. not an advance development i've seen In you from the last one you dropped here but This one is cool
Nice read here